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post #1 of 9 (permalink) Old 02-07-2008, 05:14 PM Thread Starter
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just wondering who put this up

I seen this along timeago and I saved it to my comp. I read it every now and then. Just wanted to say its fuqin awesome.

There I was sitting at my desk at work. She snuck up behind me, and slowly caressed my head. Her touch was like silk against my shaven head.



"Hello _____" she said in a seductive voice. “Why don't you spend the evening with me?"?



I was in a daze, her beauty was blinding. I couldn’t even remember what I was thinking of. All I could think of was being with her. I started to relax and forget about the gym. What was I doing tonight? I don’t remember. All I remember is being here, with her, in her arms. It felt so warm and safe. I closed my eyes and laid my head against her.



Then I felt it. First in my right arm, then in my left. They started to quiver as if possessed. I opened my eyes to see my hands changing into what looked like Claws.



'Fight it _______.. FIGHT IT!!" she begged, tears rolling down her face.

“I’m trying!! I’m trying!!" I screamed at her.



Razor sharp Claws tore out of my fingers, as I felt my body change into an abomination. Fang’s where my teeth where. Scale’s where my flesh was.



"Fight it. FORGET fighting it. I EMBRACE IT" I turned on her and let out a ROAR. She tried to run, but she was no match for what I had become. The beast within had taken over. With in seconds I had caught her and attacked. She cried in pain as my claws tore her into shreds.

As the pieces hit the floor they liquefied and seemed to be absorbed into my feet.



There I stood, drenched in blood. Once again the Bitch inside me had almost won, and stopped me from going and working out, but the animal inside had triumphed and it was time to move some Steele!!

White_Lightning.


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post #2 of 9 (permalink) Old 02-07-2008, 10:44 PM
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that was me if i rmeember correctly.. I wrote it and posted it.

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i also wrote this




Seduction.


there she was.. Sweet, slick, glistening in the noon sun. I had to have
her.. I Had to be inside her now... I walked around with my sunglasses
slightly removed from their correct position with enough of my eyes
showing to let it be know that she was in my thoughts. I ran my ands up
and down her side, around her back as I focused on feeling every curve
and bump on her body. Her attention was mine.

No one was around, the time was right. I opened the doorway to her
forbidden zone and just gazed in awe at the sheer perfection of what was
down there. I stepped closer and the sweet smell of her rose to meet me
and welcome me. I slid inside her, carefully, caringly.. totally consumed
in the moment. I moved my hand and she quivered, she knew what I wanted.
I gently rubbed around the small stick protruding from her center and
moved it around.. my hands had explored her every nook and cranny as I
prepared for what was to come. I pushed! she erupted in a banshee like
moan, I moved my hands to the side Grabbed the one thing that could
control her and moved.. no forced it with a gentle yet firm hand into
place. She loved it! she was going wild as I felt her sped to the point
of no return. Then .. silence.. I had got what I came for..
I pulled out, and covered her up. blew her a kiss and walked back into
the living room.
god I love my car

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those are badass iam gonna go ahead and steal them from u!!
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those are badass iam gonna go ahead and steal them from u!!
as long as you give me credit

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I give you mad props for the first one I dont have my nice car nemore so Ill just leave the 2nd one =( But that first one I would put that on a shirt its fuckin cool..

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as long as you give me credit

sweet fixed my first post there u go bro.

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thanks!

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I seen this along timeago and I saved it to my comp. I read it every now and then. Just wanted to say its fuqin awesome.

There I was sitting at my desk at work. She snuck up behind me, and slowly caressed my head. Her touch was like silk against my shaven head.



"Hello _____" she said in a seductive voice. “Why don't you spend the evening with me?"?



I was in a daze, her beauty was blinding. I couldn’t even remember what I was thinking of. All I could think of was being with her. I started to relax and forget about the gym. What was I doing tonight? I don’t remember. All I remember is being here, with her, in her arms. It felt so warm and safe. I closed my eyes and laid my head against her.



Then I felt it. First in my right arm, then in my left. They started to quiver as if possessed. I opened my eyes to see my hands changing into what looked like Claws.



'Fight it _______.. FIGHT IT!!" she begged, tears rolling down her face.

“I’m trying!! I’m trying!!" I screamed at her.



Razor sharp Claws tore out of my fingers, as I felt my body change into an abomination. Fang’s where my teeth where. Scale’s where my flesh was.



"Fight it. FORGET fighting it. I EMBRACE IT" I turned on her and let out a ROAR. She tried to run, but she was no match for what I had become. The beast within had taken over. With in seconds I had caught her and attacked. She cried in pain as my claws tore her into shreds.

As the pieces hit the floor they liquefied and seemed to be absorbed into my feet.



There I stood, drenched in blood. Once again the Bitch inside me had almost won, and stopped me from going and working out, but the animal inside had triumphed and it was time to move some Steele!!

White_Lightning.

After a bit of searching, I found what is probably my favourite plost in the workout forums...It should be a poster...haha. Maybe Greg can get it in his new gym if/when he gets that going!

Great write up WL
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